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©2009 ~80sElle
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From out my window I do see
A nameless boy trading eyes with me
His eyes no colour
His face with fear
His future intentions
were not so clear

Out my apartment and into the black
I stood right by with his body standing back
His face, no expression
His morals not aligned
I asked him why, and he simply replied

"I intend to make ammends"
He so aptly states
Walks off with a 'tude
And a cut on his face

I walk alongside with a similar stride
With no mind at my reach
I forget to speak
I forget to ask
And i forget to seek

All the neighbors then the town
All do follow with no sound
I look around and all I see
were all the townsmen
watching me

The only sentence repeatedly spoken
Was that of which could not be broken

"I intend to make ammends"
Repeatedly stating
Remembering my religion
My fate soon fading

I chanted along and began believing
The words expressed my mind was eating
My soul was broken
My mind was shattered
As I went along my emotion grew sadder

We arrive at the site my heart was beating
My mind with questions my nose was bleeding
The blood was dripping
My thoughts were flipping
And all of a sudden I ran retreating

I stopped, I stood, I stand there bleeding
With my energy depleting
Engraved on the pavement I read these words
And with each passing line I feel no more

"I intend to make ammends
I am sorry for my sins

Please take this as a gift of parting
My body lay here, my soul departing"

My senses were lost there's no coming back
I try to see but I'm as blind as black

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:iconravenblakh:
Fantastic image; the heavy tones and blurred figure in the distance...ah, creepy stuff, love it :heart:

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The world doesn't just disappear when you close your eyes.
:icon80selle:
I'm so glad to hear that, from you!
Thank you, my friend.

--
Man can love an angel, but, he's gotta take a chance
:iconfreakartpsycho:
This is a CLASSIC shot. It makes me think of the Twenties.
Thank you for posting this.

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"I think I must have one of those faces you can't help believing."
:icon80selle:
Thank YOU, for your lovely comment.

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Man can love an angel, but, he's gotta take a chance
:iconkazakchoc:
I've featured your work in my journal.

:wave:
:icon80selle:
Wow... Thank you, oh so much!

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Man can love an angel, but, he's gotta take a chance

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